Friday, February 27, 2009

Immersion Weeks...

What I’m most excited about for upcoming immersion would have to be not coming to school and having to go to a job site were it would be similar to a real work scene. I look forward to this because I will be gaining experience in working a full time job and gain an upper hand allowing me to have some experience for future references when I am applying for a job.


What I’m most concerned about would have to be contributing something to my internship for example sheets explain how to use a program on a computer when I don’t fully understand what I am working with at times. With there being a deadline needing to get things by adds some stress to the equation but I think it would force me to work harder. if i work harder i could accomplish many more tasks. if this turns out to be the case than I will just have to do the tasks at hand and focus on internship for the upcoming to weeks.

Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Outstanding Blogs!!!

when it comes to outstanding blogs I cant really say I've read every blog between the two classes. From the ones I have read I will attempt to give you examples of students I feel have outstanding blogs in humanities class.


The first blog I found related to economic advice given to Barrack Obama would be Amanda's blog. It being filled out well do to everything being cited as well as flowing smoothly between paragraph and information for example

"I found is that the government is cutting back on giving money to things that deserve to get money. In an article I found by Paul Krugmen it states "The original plan also included badly needed spending on school construction; $16 billion of that spending was cut.

I found this to be a good example because in the blog it also had foot notes to back up what she was saying not just the quote.




Looking for blogs that show god literary analysis i found Sydney's blog to show good examples of this.


"
Through his detailed and descriptive writing, John Steinbeck uses imagery to show you what is going on in the book. In the first part of this story, " the gift," the setting of the story is displayed using description. "The cowpumkpins were green and small yet. He went on to the sagebrush line where the cold spring ran out of its pipe and fell into a round wooden tub. He leaned over and drank close to the green mossy wood where the water tasted best ( Page 6.)" In sentences like these, John Steinbeck provides words that appeal to the senses. Instead of saying vague sentences, such as, He drank the best water, John Steinbeck provides background knowledge of the area without using filler words."

I chose this part of her blog because not only does she quote the book and tell you exactly where it is but she breaks down a sentence to show how she is able to analyze the writing and give an in depth answer as to why the John Steinbeck is a good writer.



Looking for historical writing I found Arrianah blog portray this well because it compares older issues to modern day problems. for example

"It was a big revolution when women were able to vote, because they were very underestimated in the work that they had put into building this country up. In an article written by Orlando Patterson, it explains how the voters progressed over the years. Like slowly over time women started voting even more then men did. In August 1920 the 19th amendment was made that gave women their right to vote."

This excerpt from her writing is a good example because it shows history and how over time things have changed. It also has an article to back up what it is saying.



For the fourth and final part I chose Isaac's blog because it not only has pictures of his pets but videos embedded into the blog to back up his information and i find that to be a very interactive part of a website, which is why I like his blog.

Although when it comes to the blog i found to be the most exciting over everyone in the entire class would have to be Sander Norris's blog which has a classy title saying "Divine moments of Truth." continuing through the blog i also found grade A example pictures of sea life and different ways of taking a picture. for example it focuses on underwater photography. which i find very interesting.


Friday, February 6, 2009

Oval Office...

With thirty minutes to speak in the oval office I would first address the executive pay issue with CEO's giving themselves large bonuses when their company is being ran into the ground. This issue is a problem because the companies that are asking for bailouts are companies that just about every citizen relies on to maintain a normal living. For example John Thain losing 25 billion dollars in the time he was CEO for Merrill Lynch, a bank based in New York that asked for a 50 billion dollar bailout plan.

Letting this continue on lets us believe another great depression could be right around the corner. History does repeat itself and with the recession already happening. Our country has become a step closer to entering the great depression.

This problem can be fixed by passing laws to ensure that the government knows exactly what is being done with the money, essentially the companies needing clearance before they do anything with the money, more importantly stopping one man so he can’t go out and spend 1.22 million dollars on a new office. Some of the benefits from these laws would be that the tax payer’s money would not be thrown away but essentially used to help remove this large debt and bring us out of the recession. It wouldn’t happen right away but over time it will.

with the previous laws basically allowing companies to take the money and run there was a serious issue that fell into place seeing how this was the tax payers money, an issue that truly needs to be addressed by our current government and citizens to take action and stop this.

references: New York Times

Tuesday, February 3, 2009

What Makes A Good Interview

  • Focus on Interviewee while Host is hidden: you do not see the interviewer once in the entire film. but you do hear him asking the questions while the interviewee listens to questions & answers them to his full extent.
  • (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ZL304eqveE)

  • Both individuals shown & flows conversation like: Interview Host and interviewee are clearly visible on screen at least once while the interview flows as a smooth converstaion with the questions being answered with great information and evidence to back up what they are saying.
  • (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-8sMH7_4VCI)